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Sweet Summer Spring by ~Maikaduriel:iconMaikaduriel:





Frosty days and dragon's breath
Cold winds and struggling sun.
The days are numbered, Winter-esque,
For sweet-scent Spring has sprung.

Away has blown the icy breeze,
Died has the fire's ember.
Green leaves adorn the dancing trees
As summer they remember.

The barren lands of deserts small
Drink deep the welcomed rain.
The birds preach joy in branches tall,
Forgetting Winter's pain.

The mournful dams, once empty ground
Are now replenished, lush.
The air is thick with happy sounds;
Broken is Winter's hush.

A white-grey sky has now been stained
A brilliant shade of blue,
A greener reborn landscape framed
By brown grass, green anew.

These dazzling scents and sounds of cheer
Through my clear head have rung,
And I am glad summer is near.
Sweet spring has surely sprung.
©2004-2009 ~Maikaduriel
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Author's Comments

This poem was inspired by the fact that there are water in the dams at school again. And the air is warm and you can feel summer coming... And I don't even like summer, but it put me in a good mood all the same.
I actually wrote this this morning in Religion, and finished it during my free and English. A poem by 10:25am... not a bad effort for a monday eh?
Image by the marvellous Asterisk ( ~ jabberwock-hunter ) though he's not around these parts much.

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:iconeroala:
This is so beautiful, it creates, clear, sharp and picturesque images. The damn is almost full now eh? Thats good. I really admire you for this Maika. Its one of those defining moments for you as a poet. :clap: :hug:
:iconmaikaduriel:
:) Wow, thanks Eroa! I hadn't written anything... umm... unexperimental in a while so I went back to my old methods for a taste of the old medicine and it looks like it worked.
Yeah, the dams over to the tafe are looking really beautiful at the moment, both sides are full... they've already started to evaporate again though :(

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Stay crunchy. Even in milk.
:iconeroala:
experimentation is good unless done with a male (nah joking:) )its all true what I said and i stay by it 100%!!!!!!!!!!:) (too bad about the dams:(
:iconcryslara:
:glomp: Wow, beautiful work Maika. (This is where I wish I could write poetry as well as you) You are a terrific poet, and this definately deserves a favourite.

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I'm going to live forever. So far it's working.
:iconmaikaduriel:
you're a terrific watcher and friend, Crys :) thank you honey!! :hug:

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Stay crunchy. Even in milk.
:iconshedemonwolf:
*is stunned/amazed/in awe/etc.*

I need not say any more.

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Get a taste of Magic....
...Lick a Wizard!
:iconanonimusone:
this is why you're one of my favorite poets here in DA. you have this touch of umm... magic :)

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i solemnly swear that i am up to no good
:iconmaikaduriel:
And you have an awesome avatar! :D
Thank you so much Anony. :D :hug:

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Stay crunchy. Even in milk.
:iconmaikaduriel:
:glomp: :glomp: :glomp: :glomp: :glomp: :glomp: :glomp: :glomp: :glomp: :glomp:
Thank you sdw!!! You're too kind. *glomps you some more*

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Stay crunchy. Even in milk.

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