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An hour and a half and a whole world away.
The people are different, but the language is the same.
Liquid potential and stars in every eye...
The sun has set and the night's speeding by.

But I just want to hold on to
The glory of the lights on my skin...
And I just want to fall in to
The moment and begin...

To let you into my soul through the sound of the full moon encased
In electricity, wrapped in a dream of a dream.
I took the lightning from around you and I bent it to say your name.
And even though I can't stop time, I need to capture this presence...
I need it to rain.

I feel a wall between us and I need to tear it down.
I'll take my chances fighting it with daggers made of sound.
The highlights in your hair reflect the shadows of the day...
The reminder of my promise that I'll never turn away.

Cause I just want to hold on to
The glory of the lights on my skin...
And I just want to fall in to
The moment and begin...

To let you into my soul through the sound of the full moon encased
In electricity, wrapped in a dream of a dream.
I took the lightning from around you and I bent it to say your name.
And even though I can't stop time, I need to capture this presence...
I need it to rain.
©2005-2009 ~Maikaduriel
:iconmaikaduriel:

Author's Comments

Tis lyrical. Heh. Tis lyrics...
Tis from the Neon Black song of the same name. I've spent the last hour or so watching old videos, largely of us jamming. Memories.
This song/these lyrics are dedicated to Kim Sheehy for the Northern Stars references cause she rocks (the prechorus and 1st verse) and ~SJraine since the choruses and 2nd verse are about her, from ~jaggedfreak's perspective... but written by me.
Enjoy.
I assure you, they fit the rhythm of the song.

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:iconpaschendale1988:
Wow I like it a lot.... I think it's very good :) I like the flow and the use of language... I'm not quite sure what could be done better here so I can't really give you any advanced critique... But I like it anyway :)
:iconpetit-chou-fleur:
I love the rhythm!! Absolutely awesome :)

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Tranquility interrupted by a jealous mind, life overcome by the grief of the ending, celebratory drinks for a lost occasion, a mind full of black, the tainted, dirty white.
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:iconmaikaduriel:
thanks :D glad you got something out of it.

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Stay crunchy. Even in milk.
:iconsjraine:
You wrote about the glass wall! Amusment. Dear Maika, well done. I think it deserves a fave, simply cos you managed to unravel Laurens ramblings. :D Trust me, its an achievement.

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- All I Need Now Is Some Intellectual Intercourse - :sarcasticclap: ... :pride:
:iconmaikaduriel:
Thanks honey :) :hug: :hug: :hug:

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Stay crunchy. Even in milk.
:iconmaikaduriel:
hahah thanks honey :) Yeah I wrote the chorus about you almost by accident, and then I invested in Loren's memories for inspiration thereafter. I remember serenading you this down the phone but you could only hear the high bits :)
For you :) :hug:

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Stay crunchy. Even in milk.
:iconsjraine:
Ah, good times. Stupid phone reception. lol. I shall return you a :glomp: because Im sure I owe you one for something. hmmm.
I did tell you the high bits sounded good, right? :)

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- All I Need Now Is Some Intellectual Intercourse - :sarcasticclap: ... :pride:
:iconbrianbrane:
You need to find a nice young man who appreciates this stuff.

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Peace.
I am out of here.
Word up.

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:iconmaikaduriel:
Yeah I could do with one of those.
Thanks :)

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Stay crunchy. Even in milk.

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